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Wedding vows of a depressant by ~rocknrollos:iconrocknrollos:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Married Romance > Open


You make my knife feel so cold to me
The place where I found comfort
My bottle of pills lasts for more than just one night
And the alcohol left untouched by my side

When I’m with you
Your warmth melts the icy sun of my life
And the smile on your lips
Cancels out my hundred reasons to die

My nightmares have faded away
And now I can rest in piece beside you
No more screaming and no more crying
Only sound is that of sweet laughter

So I ask you one last time
Please don’t turn me down again
You’re all I live for all that I need to live

So I ask you one last time
Before my heart breaks again
And I’m left stony and alone

One last time I ask you
Will you marry me?
Oh will you marry me?
©2006-2009 ~rocknrollos
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Author's Comments

Yes it's meant to be slightly cheesy in parts :p

But its something with a bit more of a cheerful spin... hell I need it after 6 weeks of hell

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~Rage-and-Love-x Feb 25, 2006, 11:21:54 AM
Oh wow thats amazing! Im one of those depressant people and this makes you realise there IS a way out other than suicide/self harm etc.
Wow I almost cried when reading this amazing!

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**99 Red Balloons
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~rocknrollos Feb 25, 2006, 2:39:15 PM
I didn't think it was that good! lol knocked it up in about 10mins! lol

But thank you very much, I'm glad you like it *thumbs up* - and thanks for the fave!!!
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~bluebird-laughing Feb 25, 2006, 3:12:21 PM
I really like it Ed, it's sweet and hopeful even with the depressant twist.

"My nightmares have faded away
And now I can rest in piece beside you
No more screaming and no more crying
Only sound is that of sweet laughter"

*peace not piece :P

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Blessed be to the gods of rock, today I am one holy motherfucker
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~rocknrollos Feb 25, 2006, 4:30:46 PM
Actually thats delibrate, instead of being cut into pieces with a razor or broken heart etc, its one piece
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~nirvana1014 Feb 25, 2006, 4:34:05 PM
aw. it is cheesy, but good. =P

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*~|3rY|\|~*
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~rocknrollos Feb 26, 2006, 3:53:11 AM
Nice bit of chedder
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